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Beach Day

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:iconfionnaplz::iconsaysplz: Hey Marshall, catch!

I know it's pretty funny looking, but I was trying out perspective. I failed pretty badly, but someday I will get it right >:O *determined face* This picture originally had lines, but I think it looks super awesome without it. I pretty much just scribbled in the background to make the water. The water is shallow so that's why she's not really wet.

Textures are the best things ever. Enough said.

Please comment I worked hard on this ;v;
Critique highly encouraged :D
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Wow! Personally this is really pretty~But since this is a critique I guess I'll start. In my eyes, she looks a bit too skinny. He leg looks a bit odd due to no lines. So maybe~I would suggest you went back in, took like a really light brown and put lines on her? Her face is very cute, it just looks weird to me from this angle. Her hands...to me they could be a bit more detailed, And the ball isn't exactly a circle but other than that this picture is amazing. sorry if i sounded rude~Hope it helped! Heh ^^